Finished my note for my s/o. Feedback?

[Dwilson1217]

This makes me feel so sad. I'm so sorry it's come to this, for both you and your s/o

 

[realjunes]

You're welcome.

You do indeed have a way with words. You've made a seemingly impossible prose task appear mostly effortless. It's meaningful, covers the bases, diffuses unanswered questions, recognizes the unknown and shares a bit of hope.

You got words yourself, very nice.

 

[MisanthropicLycan]

This is a touching note which was really sad to read. I can't help but find beauty in the melancholia of the words. Tragic poetry. Almost made me cry.

 

[WhiteDespair]

@lunarpoppies420 best wishes. Your note is the ending to Casablanca. I'm touched.

 

[Wreck-it-Riley]

You're a perceptive man, I'm sure you already understand the nature of this note. Don't look for me, I'm in the room but I've hidden specifically so that you don't have to see something traumatic. Call 911, they'll know what to do. I'm not sure how legally binding something like this is, but if it is I'd prefer to entrust the deposition of my remains to you. I'd ideally like to be cremated, and you can do what you like with what's left, but I'd prefer it if my family had as little to do with this as possible because honestly they don't deserve it. Don't bother with a funeral, that's an expense nobody is prepared to handle. Please understand that my decision to do this had nothing to do with you or anyone else, it's been the plan for many years now. It's just that my strength has finally run out, and I need to rest now. If there's a life after this one, I'll still be here to guide you and look after you. Don't feel like I've left you behind because I haven't, I'm just on the other side of the veil so to speak. This isn't for lack of love for you, I loved you as much as a human is capable of loving another, and will continue to do so. Death won't take the things we had from either of us. I'm so so sorry that I let you get attached to my physical being, I still understand that loss I'm imposing upon you, but please keep our memories close to your heart and there I'll continue to live. Until our next life, goodbye, and I loved you so.

This is what i have been trying to put into words for my boyfriend.