Loving the Sun

[quietwater]

Little reminder that this is not a tangible vent or story or anything, I just write down my feelings in """poetry""" (as a hardly define myself as a real poet). I'm very sorry if you expected anything else :(
Feel free to interpret this as you like <3

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I think the Sun must be sad.


He's always so radiant, he lights up everything.
He laughs, and jokes, and smiles at me from up above...
But he never reaches out.

Maybe it's because he's just pretending to be so shiny,
Maybe he would feel pathetic if his radiance turned in a shadow.
So it's me who reaches out.

I'm always so amazed, by his talent and so much else.
I kiss him, and hold him, and watch him from down here...
But I never see the night.

Maybe it's because I like to burn,
Maybe I would feel too cold without my Sun,
who makes my shadows finally follow me and my radiance shine more than ever.


But I still think that the Sun must be sad.

And everyday I think I see his tears in the sky.

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[SmollMushroom]

Praise the Sun \[T]/

 

[WAITING TO DIE]

Nice.
You have a great imagination and write well.

 

[quietwater]

Praise the Sun \[T]/

:)<33

Nice.
You have a great imagination and write well.

Thank you so much, I really appreciate your words :)

 

[DeadlineDialer]

Absolutely lovely poem. You are talented in your way with words, I hope you cherish that

 

[annique]

beautifully written, thanks for sharing with us a little part of your expressive being

 

[quietwater]

Absolutely lovely poem. You are talented in your way with words, I hope you cherish that

thank you so much, really. I appreciate your words :)<33

beautifully written, thanks for sharing with us a little part of your expressive being

thank you for the kind comment! i'm really happy to share my thoughts like this, and more than happy to see that other people can relate and appreciate <3★