Does this make sense? It’ll be what I leave behind.

[LimpBizkit]

This is the note I'm leaving behind. I just wanted to know if it was good enough.

I'm so very sorry

That I let you die

I'm so very sorry

I let you become the most neglected part of my mind

But I had no choice as to weather or not I'd leave you behind

In truth I had betrayed you

And Now we're here

Just me and just you

And I haven't the slightest clue

As to what to do

Who are you?

I had forgotten

And now

Myself and I are strangers

And when I looked in the mirror

There was a war behind her eyes

And bruises on her sides

And scars on her wrists and thighs

And I saw the blank space of her mind

Right where the stars used to be

And It Brought me to my knees

 

[Hollowman]

It's very good.

 

[Laklusta]

It is soothing to read, I feel you. You did well.

 

[FuneralCry]

I think it's a personal decision deciding what to leave in a note, it shouldn't matter what other people think, it's about what you think is best to leave. But anyway best wishes.