lady sea

lady sea

the sea is my string of hope
Feb 24, 2019
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Depending on the aura around your family by the time the second child is born, you get an Anpeo or you get a Vodi Nas. If you aren't able to have a child for whatever reason, you automatically get a Vodi Nas. Anpeos are like angels or gardians, while Vodi Nas are in a way like angels, but they are for people who do not have the right mindset to really move on in the world. For the troublemakers, if you will. No one knows what you have other than you and your family. It is forbidden to say what you have to other people. If your family is kind and loving then you get a Anpeo but if you have a family that is distant to one another then you get a Vodi Nas. Vodi Nas' are good angel like spirits, they guide the families who are lost and broken. Anpeos are there for families who aren't broken to make sure they stay that way.



See, every since I can remember, my family has always had an Anpeo. I am the third child out of four. Two older brothers and one younger sister. None of us are truly alike in my opinion. The oldest one is Nate, he is 24 years old, bisexual, and loves to party to the max (he's my favorite). Nate has dark brown hair with dyed blonde tips that is always messily combed, hazel eyes,a body of a person who never works out yet manages to be thin, and a playful smile.



Then, there is the obnoxiously self-absorbed one, Tristan. He thinks he's better than anyone. Prove him wrong and you'll end up in the wrong side of a fork. He is 20 years old and also has dark brown hair but his eyes are regular old brown, unfortunately that doesn't stop every girl in Los Angeles to fall for him. He played football in high school which should be enough detail for you to picture him. His ego is so high up, I don't think you can ever see the end of it by looking up.



After Tristan, there's me. I'm like the ugly duckling or chicken little. At home, I am invisible and annoying when I'm not but at school if I'm friends with you then I can be pretty loud. Except when it comes to Leo. But that is a tale for another time. I have hazelnut brown hair and green eyes. I am the only one to inherit my father's green' eyes. Everyone else got some mean brown eyes. And by mean I mean wicked awesome. I'm not skinny nor am I "fat." Everyone has always complimented my body and the way it curves but to be completely honest? I hate it. Then again, what fifteen year old doesn't hate their body, right?



Last but certainly not least, My sister Margrett. She is a year and a half younger than me but 2 years younger when it comes to school. She started school late. Margrett is everyone's favorite girl with her puppy dog eyes. Since she is the youngest, she obviously gets everything she asks for. Very annoying. I can get out of giving her things because I'm persuasive, unfortunately for the rest of the world, they can't. Try to say no to her. Go ahead and see how it goes. I dare you. It's nearly impossible. She also has many friends, more than I can ever have.



A pretty important part of this story is Aza. My very morbid, introvert, bestfriend. I have known her since the very first day of freshman year when I somehow got the courage to ask to see her schedule. I practically snatched it out of her hand before she could respond. I guess in our relationship, I'm the talkative one while she just listens to me and gives me advice. She's pretty smart and loves to write. She also likes to read but not nearly as much as me. I secretly think her family has a Vodi Nas. For reasons I can't exactly explain. If you ever see Aza in anything other than black clothes with matching black eyeliner, it's a miracle. She always has her chocolate brown, very curly hair in a ponytail and has this death aura around her that you can't exactly see but you can feel. Like something in her was taken and she longs for it.



As for me, I am a total bookworm. I'll go to parties, go to the mall, go out to eat, but I will always have a book with me. Sometimes I won't read a single word in the book when I go out but I just feel so much more safer when I know I have a book in my hand.


A/N: Did you guys like it? I will post chapter 1 later today!
 
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Not bad :smiling: ....Is the first book you have written?
 
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Is this an auto-biography?
 
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Depending on the aura around your family by the time the second child is born, you get an Anpeo or you get a Vodi Nas. If you aren't able to have a child for whatever reason, you automatically get a Vodi Nas. Anpeos are like angels or gardians, while Vodi Nas are in a way like angels, but they are for people who do not have the right mindset to really move on in the world. For the troublemakers, if you will. No one knows what you have other than you and your family. It is forbidden to say what you have to other people. If your family is kind and loving then you get a Anpeo but if you have a family that is distant to one another then you get a Vodi Nas. Vodi Nas' are good angel like spirits, they guide the families who are lost and broken. Anpeos are there for families who aren't broken to make sure they stay that way.



See, every since I can remember, my family has always had an Anpeo. I am the third child out of four. Two older brothers and one younger sister. None of us are truly alike in my opinion. The oldest one is Nate, he is 24 years old, bisexual, and loves to party to the max (he's my favorite). Nate has dark brown hair with dyed blonde tips that is always messily combed, hazel eyes,a body of a person who never works out yet manages to be thin, and a playful smile.



Then, there is the obnoxiously self-absorbed one, Tristan. He thinks he's better than anyone. Prove him wrong and you'll end up in the wrong side of a fork. He is 20 years old and also has dark brown hair but his eyes are regular old brown, unfortunately that doesn't stop every girl in Los Angeles to fall for him. He played football in high school which should be enough detail for you to picture him. His ego is so high up, I don't think you can ever see the end of it by looking up.



After Tristan, there's me. I'm like the ugly duckling or chicken little. At home, I am invisible and annoying when I'm not but at school if I'm friends with you then I can be pretty loud. Except when it comes to Leo. But that is a tale for another time. I have hazelnut brown hair and green eyes. I am the only one to inherit my father's green' eyes. Everyone else got some mean brown eyes. And by mean I mean wicked awesome. I'm not skinny nor am I "fat." Everyone has always complimented my body and the way it curves but to be completely honest? I hate it. Then again, what fifteen year old doesn't hate their body, right?



Last but certainly not least, My sister Margrett. She is a year and a half younger than me but 2 years younger when it comes to school. She started school late. Margrett is everyone's favorite girl with her puppy dog eyes. Since she is the youngest, she obviously gets everything she asks for. Very annoying. I can get out of giving her things because I'm persuasive, unfortunately for the rest of the world, they can't. Try to say no to her. Go ahead and see how it goes. I dare you. It's nearly impossible. She also has many friends, more than I can ever have.



A pretty important part of this story is Aza. My very morbid, introvert, bestfriend. I have known her since the very first day of freshman year when I somehow got the courage to ask to see her schedule. I practically snatched it out of her hand before she could respond. I guess in our relationship, I'm the talkative one while she just listens to me and gives me advice. She's pretty smart and loves to write. She also likes to read but not nearly as much as me. I secretly think her family has a Vodi Nas. For reasons I can't exactly explain. If you ever see Aza in anything other than black clothes with matching black eyeliner, it's a miracle. She always has her chocolate brown, very curly hair in a ponytail and has this death aura around her that you can't exactly see but you can feel. Like something in her was taken and she longs for it.



As for me, I am a total bookworm. I'll go to parties, go to the mall, go out to eat, but I will always have a book with me. Sometimes I won't read a single word in the book when I go out but I just feel so much more safer when I know I have a book in my hand.


A/N: Did you guys like it? I will post chapter 1 later today!
Captivating. You have a gift. Keep it up.
 
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no it's just in first person
Almost believable. Have you tried writing a story about yourself?

I liked how you described her best friend, "Like something in her was taken and she longs for it."
Really feel that part.
 
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