I wrote a will

[Faith_No_more]

I fled my home state because of barbaric politics, religion, and my abusive parents. and I wrote a will. Can anyone tell me if it looks okay?

I,(blank), am writing my will and wishes.

I wish to leave my vehicle to (Blank.)
The remaining balance in my bank will go to (blank.)
I also wish to be cremated in (State) and have my memorial in (City)
It is also against my wishes to have my biological parents attend my funeral. they played a role in my death.
I leave my funeral arrangement and care to (Blank)
10-02-2023
(Signature)

 

[Inthewind]

Looks direct and simple, nice. I feeel like this should work, but check in your state if you need two people to see you write it then maybe they should sign it aswell? So they can voice and say they know you wrote it and this isnt from someone else, or OR!! Or maybe you can record yourself writing it to prove that you wrote it and no one forced you to say it so that the people and law recognizes this as your wishes. I know nothin bout wills, or laws but I feel they may not do it unless you prove it is you who wrote it. Also if you have any other belongings not listed then you can give to (blank), so no matter what everything is taken care of?