Venting Something I wrote

[phoenixx]

Hello. So I wrote something earlier, a poem I guess? I just wanted to see what other people thought about it!


When the day comes

And I'm not here anymore

Just know that I tried

I tried so hard

But when you're this broken

It's not easy to fix

You can try to fight

But you'll have to do it every day

Every hour

Every minute

Every second

There is no rest

It's a constant battle

With your demons

And you're tired

You're weak

You're exhausted

This is not a life

Not a life worth living

 

[mpnf]

Pretty much how I feel. Most of us.

 

[HelloHell]

I could see this as song lyrics. Great job!
It expresses what i feel pretty accurately

 

[FuneralCry]

It is very well written. I can certainly relate to it.