Hold

[Deleted member 14177]

One last dream
before the sun rises;
and I call to them
if they can even hear me

Suddenly i'm stranded
in the middle of an ocean;
and I call for you
if you can even hear me

Steady saving you
my entire last breath;
and I hold and I hold
wondering when you'll see me

Steady saving you
my entire me, myself;
and I hold and I hold and I hold
wondering when you'll need me

 

[MysticPerception]

Beautiful. I wasn't sure what to expect when I saw the thread title coming in but that was a wonderful poem.

 

[Deleted member 14177]

Beautiful. I wasn't sure what to expect when I saw the thread title coming in but that was a wonderful poem.

Thank you so much

 

[Thereisnothing]

@poet another super poem, your words and expression as so profound, they reach me deeply and entirely.

 

[Deleted member 14177]

@poet another super poem, your words and expression as so profound, they reach me deeply and entirely.

Oh thank you so so much. You are so kind!!!

 

[Thereisnothing]

Oh thank you so so much. You are so kind!!!

Nothing to do with being kind sweetheart, I am a writer myself and takes a lot to touch and impress me on such a level

 

[Epsilon0]

It's so nice to have a resident poet on the forum. Good job, @poet !

 

[a.n.kirillov]

and glue


That one stuck in my head
I wonder why tho

so you have my vote as well in the official SS resident poet elections

 

[Deleted member 14177]

Thank you so serio

It's so nice to have a resident poet on the forum. Good job, @poet !

Thank you so much!

and glue


That one stuck in my head
I wonder why tho

so you have my vote as well in the official SS resident poet elections

Ahh thank you!!! You are so kind


Truly, thank you both, your kind words mean so much to me.